I’m re-reading the early chapters of the novel I’m currently drafting, and I found these notes at the top of one of the chapters:
“My team are at the shore, and fend off one attack (probably not by the big bad, not yet). So, an initial attack. By what, I’ve no idea; fended off how, also no idea.”
And that is how I write my novels. (Honestly, it’s a miracle I ever get anything published.)
This is what those notes tell me:
I knew there was going to be a fight. I knew the attack wasn’t by the major villain, because I didn’t want to give away their identity this early in the story. I also knew I needed my main characters to win the fight. But I had no idea who attacks them, and no idea how they win.
And the really interesting thing is, I leapt into writing that chapter with no fear or trepidation at all. (And I’ve just been reading over what I wrote, and I’m really happy with it.)
I should clarify, these were not notes I made months. weeks or even days before I wrote this particular chapter. These are the notes I made on the morning I sat down to write it.
I had no idea what I was doing in this scene. But I wrote it anyway.
So how did I go from “ I have no idea, x 2 “, to a couple of thousand words of fight scene?
I did it by the power of questions!
a few of the notebooks I’ve been scribbling in recently
Because this is what I wrote next:
Q – Ok, if it’s not the big bad, who is it?
Q – Is it someone he sent?
Q – Is it someone he has paid or persuaded or compelled? How will that affect how they fight?
Q – Is it one monster, or a gang?
Q – If it is a gang, what could that gang be composed of?
A – Probably needs to be at least one opponent for each of my team. And the opponents need to be powerful enough that we are worried our team might lose, but not so powerful that they DO lose, or indeed that they get so badly injured we can’t move to the next scene So, we could go for….
And that’s when I started listing various magical creatures and their relative strengths, and working out how many baddies was enough to possibly defeat my team, but not quite enough to definitely defeat them.
And that’s where it all becomes secret and confidential and I can’t tell you any more!
But that’s a very brief explanation of how I go from ‘I have no idea’ to a story. I ask questions. And I write the answers (often in the form of lists or indeed other supplementary questions.)
There are probably faster, simpler, less convoluted ways of writing a novel. But this is the way that works for me! It’s also the way I enjoy writing…
Stories are all about what happens next, so finding out what happens next by sitting down and writing it, discovering the story as I type, feels perfectly sensible to me!
If you want to know what novel I’m writing – I can’t say yet. Though as you can tell, it does have monsters and magic and fights. And all going well, it might be out in a couple of years’ time.
So, if you’re ever stuck in a story, and don’t know what happens next, don’t worry! Just ask the story a few questions!
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